Loz (lozenger8) wrote in 1973flashfic,
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1973flashfic

Water Challenge, by Loz

Title: In Diving Deeper Down
Author: Loz (lozenger8)
Rating: G
Word Count: 125 words.
Notes: I was very much inspired by this beautiful piece from my other major fandom due South to undertake something slightly different for this fortnight's challenge. I chose a form I enjoy a lot. Sam's gone away from Manchester for some time, to the sea.




The water laps around his head.
His eyes are firmly closed.
Is it better to be comatose or dead?

Was he past life living, like she said?
Another life and time transposed.
The water laps around his head.

He could be completely mad instead.
That option he had heard proposed.
Is it better to be comatose or dead?

All the while he’s filled with dread.
His nerves and fears are all exposed.
The water laps around his head.

The future was once more to be tread.
Or lived right now, juxtaposed.
Is it better to be comatose or dead?

In the end, his arms he’ll spread.
Railing against the sea opposed.
The water laps around his head.
Is it better to be comatose or dead?

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